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Dark Yuna
post Jul 10 2007, 06:46 PM
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I'll be 15 years old. I'm getting old laugh.gif

Is there anything specific that you would like me to write about (within the theme of the project, of course)? I'm stuck for ideas.


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post Jul 10 2007, 06:48 PM
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lol then IīM old!

um... if youīre stuck, you can write about anything you feel like, ok?
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post Jul 10 2007, 06:51 PM
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Ok, but if a related poem comes to mind, I'll use that one. Otherwise, I'll post a normal one.

And yeah, you're old tongue.gif


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post Jul 10 2007, 06:54 PM
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Thanks tongue.gif

So, yeah, do whatever comes to mind if itīs easier.
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post Aug 17 2007, 11:27 AM
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Ok, after over a month, I have something new. I haven't had much time to write anything, because I've been out all the time, so this one might not be too good.

Lyrics 3 - Echoes on the Ocean - 2 days ago, me and my cousin (also best friend) got our heads together and composed a song. We have covered the rhythm guitar, lead guitar, solo, bassline and lyrics in the two days leading up to now. The lyrics will be sung to an electric acoustic guitar, set to a clean sound, to project each note fully, with a slightly distorted solo, but not distorted enough to cancel out the clean effects of the guitar. We thought about a piano/keyboard playing in the background, but it has not been decided yet. So here are the current lyrics to Echoes on the Ocean.

(Intro)

(verse 1) I look to the heavens
And what do I see?
I see your reflection
Smiling at me
Your eyes shine like starlight
Like theyíre lighting my way
To a beautiful twilight
At the end of the day
I look to the night sky
Counting the stars
When one starís time dies,
Another one starts
Your voice sings so clearly
Like fresh morning dew
Iím holding on dearly
To memories of you

(slow drums up to chorus)

(chorus) I need you my lover
I need you right here
To share all my feelings
And wipe off my tears
I canít shake these thoughts, and,
I cannot let go
Reliving my past
In an endless echo

(slow drums to verse, small guitar part)

I look to the oceans,
And what do I need?
Iím trapping emotions
Which have to be freed
Your smile is soothing
Like a leaf in the wind
I have to keep moving
See it through to the end
I look to the sunshine
Searching for clues
Of how messed up my mind
Would be without you
Your hair is so colourful
Like flowers in bloom
Our lives have been wonderful
All thanks to you
(slow drums up to chorus)

(chorus) I need you my lover
I need you right here
To share all my feelings
And wipe off my tears
I canít shake these thoughts, and
I cannot let go
Reliving my past
In an endless echo

(slow drums to verse, small guitar part)

(clean guitar solo)

(drums up to chorus)

(chorus) I need you my lover
I need you right here
To share all my feelings
And wipe off my tears
I canít shake these thoughts, and
I cannot let go
Reliving my past
In an endless echo


(chorus) I need you my lover
I need you right here
To share all my feelings
And wipe off my tears
I canít shake these thoughts, and
I cannot let go
Reliving my past
In an endless echo

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post Aug 17 2007, 12:27 PM
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QUOTE
I haven't had much time to write anything, because I've been out all the time, so this one might not be too good.

Don't worry about it. It's really good. smile.gif


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post Aug 17 2007, 02:22 PM
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^ Thanks very much, NervPoison biggrin.gif I'm glad you liked it!


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post Aug 25 2007, 07:28 PM
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wow... you two composed that in 2 days?!
You're both incredibly talented!

I really like the chorus too. It's a really nice song.
do you have a band?
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post Aug 26 2007, 07:41 AM
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Wow, you're very creative Dark Yuna. I like the lyrics to Echoes On The Ocean - the imagery is all there. If you ever happen to record it sometime, put it on Youtube or something - I'm sure it will sound great smile.gif


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post Aug 26 2007, 10:45 AM
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Thanks for the comments, CREA & BA smile.gif

@CREA: We don't have a full band yet - we're still waiting for a decision from my friend's cousin (our potential second guitarist, and HIS friend who is our potential vocalist). But we have a lead guitarist, bassist/keyboard, and drummer.

@BA: We intend to get recording at some stage (after we get the full band, of course xD), and we thought about putting the recordings on YouTube or MySpace, for 'publicity', so I've been told. So if/when we get a MySpace/ YouTube account, I'll post the link(s) biggrin.gif


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post Aug 31 2007, 10:04 PM
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^Oh

hopefully it all works out smile.gif I'd love to see (or hear) your songs.
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post Sep 1 2007, 01:48 PM
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QUOTE(Dark Yuna @ Aug 26 2007, 06:45 PM) *

@BA: We intend to get recording at some stage (after we get the full band, of course xD), and we thought about putting the recordings on YouTube or MySpace, for 'publicity', so I've been told. So if/when we get a MySpace/ YouTube account, I'll post the link(s) biggrin.gif


Ha, sounds good DY. That would be awesome to be part of a band, and of course, the creative process behind recording the music, mixing music, and writing lyrics. Yeah, its good to give a newbie band some publicity, and show everyone what you guys are like so far. I look forward to it biggrin.gif


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post Sep 1 2007, 04:30 PM
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Me too!
I'll definitly be a fan smile.gif

btw, what kind of music do you guys play?
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post Sep 1 2007, 05:07 PM
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@BA: Will keep you posted in this thread if you wanna know anything.

@CREA: We're gonna be playing rock music, with mixes of both modern and classic rock, so that we have a balance. Nothing like death metal/screamo, though. That's just...bad xD


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post Sep 1 2007, 05:17 PM
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QUOTE(Dark Yuna @ Sep 2 2007, 01:07 AM) *

@BA: Will keep you posted in this thread if you wanna know anything.

@CREA: We're gonna be playing rock music, with mixes of both modern and classic rock, so that we have a balance. Nothing like death metal/screamo, though. That's just...bad xD


Alrighty, cheers.

Its good that you're not going into death metal or screamo. I don't dig that stuff either xD


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post Sep 1 2007, 05:49 PM
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Aw, death metal's kind of good!
Oh well. I'm a rock junkie, so I'd probably like your music anyway smile.gif
I already like the lyrics!
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post Sep 13 2007, 12:14 AM
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haha nice DY.

Just wanted to stop by and show my support.
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post Sep 13 2007, 06:30 PM
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^ Thanks KL. I notice you've been married several more times in my absence o_O

Poem 5 - Fury - Guess what mood I was in when I wrote this mellow.gif I was thinking about renaming it as something like 'Vengeance', but it's not as fitting. Parts may be disjointed and stuff, but I suppose you could say it adds to the frantic feeling of the poem (if that's even there). It's darker than most thing that I write (with good reason), so it might not be as good as my other work. The poem is supposed to represent a person slowly descending into chaos and, ultimately, madness, and becoming a tool of evil in the last stanza.

Through the wind's howls, I hear your name,
Like poison in the air, driving me insane,
Intoxicating, changing me within
I feel my cold blood surge through my skin
Hiding the real me, producing a lie,
To cover up my rage, I try and I try
To forgive you, but it just cannot be
Obeying the fury inside of me.

Through the thunder's roar, I hear your voice,
Like an ultimatum where I don't have any choice,
Always there, always haunting me,
Stuck in my head, always taunting me,
Pushing me close, close to the brink
Of the limits in my mind, stopping me think
Losing my conscience, losing control,
Releasing the fury I tried to withhold.

Through the fires of Hell, I hear you scream,
At the end of my nightmare, the start of my dream,
As my conscience is warping, my mind starts to twist,
Becoming inhuman, impossible to resist
The temptation of evil, the urge to kill,
I try not to do it, but I know that I will,
As my hands clutch your throat, squeezing it tight,
Ending my fury, and ending your life.


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post Sep 13 2007, 09:44 PM
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I like the poem DY.
You did good.

btw, yeah, I got married. remember what I told you though, favorite. xD


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post Sep 14 2007, 03:00 PM
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I like this poem a lot too. Great use of rhyme and imagery (without being too abstract). I'm jealous of you! smile.gif
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