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post Sep 15 2007, 06:31 PM
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Nice one, NP =)
You also write stories? I'll go check it out...
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post Sep 17 2007, 10:41 PM
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You also write stories? I'll go check it out...

Actually, I only write poems as a practice to topple the challenge of a large, solid story one day. angel.gif

Zoology And Haikus

Birds abandon me
No longer nest in my soul
It's still so early

Slither on my skin
Reptiles have Time in their claws
Only I may die

Fish that swim upstream
How ignorantly they flail
As brothers on land

Bring me bluer skies
Bring me golden insects too
Queen bee, I am yours

Heavy elephant
Hunted for its pricelessness
I am proud of you

Now I will enjoy
Happy moons are everywhere
As a cat I'll purr


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post Sep 27 2007, 09:06 PM
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Nice one, an animal allegory smile.gif


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post Sep 28 2007, 02:57 PM
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Outsider

What does it feel like
To have the world all to yourself
To limbo in undeath
To be here and somewhere else

Were you on that same bus?
I never understood

I never ever will
You're so morning mist
You're so shower curtain
You're so white noise

A planet stuffed into our bus
Leaving room for aliens

A gun slides off my hand
One bus
One random girl
One barrel's backdraft

"Bang!"


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post Sep 28 2007, 08:36 PM
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Hmmm...I've wrote about many things already.
Time for a tribute.

This is a tribute to a certain weird character from a certain weird video game.

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Zenith

Cold princess
Caged and caging
Stares at ceilings
Sees the limits

Gazing upward
Icy glare
Stagnant sky
But if only


The red bird
Bird of Happiness
Scatters feathers
Doesn't fly


Fluttering out
Dying away
Mockingbird
Says goodbye

Poor Baroness
Saw the limits
Empty cage
Still no freedom


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I tried to make it flow too, being jealous of Michiko. laugh.gif
Hope it worked.

Guess the character and receive a cookie. wink.gif


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post Sep 30 2007, 03:31 PM
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Wanted to do something new. Don't think I wrote like this before. Also, it's my longes poem so far.

Middle Of The Circle

Standing where I shouldn't stand
Sigil of a black sun
Nailed toes-first to the floor
In the middle of a circle

Flash-forward to where I break free
I'm now completely different
Possibly better, somehow worse

Back to where we left what's real
It's not over till it's over
Coins still always end up heads
Dice roll snake eyes every time

I'm no genie in a bottle
Casting spells will make me choke
For I have wishes of my own

Mindless person, check your watch
You'll see that clocks go round and round
You'll see that time's a destined loop
And that you stood there all along

Flash-back to where it started
We could just count the annual rings
But no-one got close enough to tell

Toss me a rope
Don't toss me a rope
Before we jump to conclusions
I'll contemplate a little more

Don't think their darts thrive on laughter
If there's a bull's eye, it's not you
Nor anyone in this circumpunct

The culprit's me and me alone
Strapping myself to a fireless stake
And while I chose no more than this
Certainity has fled from me

Such an extrovertled introvert
Just this once I feel like snapping
But then everyone would see


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post Oct 1 2007, 07:38 PM
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Velocity


Point blank

His feet walk right in front of him
The drifter drifts as logic would have it


Everyone's a kindred spirit
He's glimpsed on before forgotten
A loose end of the mainstream


Flint elbows jet forth
Release cold sparks upon collision
Embryonic feelings
Killed before they hatched


And yet there's birth within the gray
When the metropolis wakes up
Swifter, faster
Acceleration at its finest
The human RACE


The polar opposite of urban legends
Rapidly carried on heavy winds
Murmurs ruffle through his hair
Speed walking through the volume
The city plays his tune
And he's fine with that


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post Oct 1 2007, 07:55 PM
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I love your writings NP smile.gif


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post Oct 1 2007, 08:13 PM
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NP, I don't like the format of this poem. I think it would be way more intense in a condensed, run along sentence-y sort of thing.


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post Oct 1 2007, 08:39 PM
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NP, I don't like the format of this poem. I think it would be way more intense in a condensed, run along sentence-y sort of thing.

Yeah, I understand if you don't like it. I had many doubts about inserting it too, since it slows down reading (which doesn't fit the poem theme, and I think that's what you meant?).

However, there's some "meaning" behind the format, which made me come to this one:
- Chaos, stress (major theme). This poem had to be a pain to read, imho.
- The centered ending is to represents the destination.
- The "surface" encompasses more space than the previous poems, to give a faint idea of crowds and masses.
- To a lesser extent, it bears vague similarities with a street plan, satellite photo and/or cityscape.

I appreciate your opinion, I really do. smile.gif
And it makes perfect sense too. It has potential to be read more fluently in a different format indeed.
Still, I'll keep this one for now, if you don't mind. I'll wait for other reactions too.
But thanks a lot! wink.gif

@rainbowbrat and Michiko: I didn't know you guys read my work. It's great to hear, seriously! Thanks guys! biggrin.gif


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post Oct 1 2007, 08:49 PM
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Ya, I read your stuff, I just never posted, but I really liked the last 2 you posted tongue.gif


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post Oct 1 2007, 10:13 PM
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NP, I don't like the format of this poem. I think it would be way more intense in a condensed, run along sentence-y sort of thing.

Yeah, I understand if you don't like it. I had many doubts about inserting it too, since it slows down reading (which doesn't fit the poem theme, and I think that's what you meant?).

However, there's some "meaning" behind the format, which made me come to this one:
- Chaos, stress (major theme). This poem had to be a pain to read, imho.
- The centered ending is to represents the destination.
- The "surface" encompasses more space than the previous poems, to give a faint idea of crowds and masses.
- To a lesser extent, it bears vague similarities with a street plan, satellite photo and/or cityscape.

I appreciate your opinion, I really do. smile.gif
And it makes perfect sense too. It has potential to be read more fluently in a different format indeed.
Still, I'll keep this one for now, if you don't mind. I'll wait for other reactions too.
But thanks a lot! wink.gif

@rainbowbrat and Michiko: I didn't know you guys read my work. It's great to hear, seriously! Thanks guys! biggrin.gif


1. Yeah, that's basically what I was trying to say! I guess that is just my personal preference of style when it comes to poetry!

2. LOL it's your poem dear! Keep it any way you like. If you do change it up though, I would like to see how you did it.


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post Oct 4 2007, 07:52 PM
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Nothing too new or interesting, but after all the pessimistic and somber poems I thought it was about time for something light-hearted.

Walk On Lilies

As a wee toddler
Treading from sky to sky
Stopping only for the next fantasy
Let me

Ribbiting my wishes
Into the wishing pond
Channeling starts
Allegretto

Sniffing a bouquet of expectations
Feeling the stones
While crossing the river
Anticipation

Playing games
Without winning or losing
Just playing
That's art


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post Oct 4 2007, 08:26 PM
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Love it!

Your so creative!


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post Oct 5 2007, 11:24 PM
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I really liked this one. It is also full of imaginery, thing that I like, as you know


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post Oct 6 2007, 07:28 PM
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Guess what's new in this one. smile.gif

Enfant Terrible

Parfois l'amour tue
Parfois l'amour bénit
Et parfois l'amour fait rien
Et c'est à cause d'elle

Une diablesse génial
Qui laisse tinter ses médailles
Au poche, au coin
D'une oase sombre
Une machine parfaite
Dans une système défectueux
A rien à preuver
Tire les liens
Connaît et détruit
Sa raison d'être
Elle fait qu'elle fait
Savoir le monde
Oublier la chaleur

Et moi, je l'aime
Comme l'éclair aime le cuivre
Comme les cris des grillons
Aiment chuchoter à la nuit
Que je l'aime
Peut-être je serai la vermine
Qui glisse dans ses oreilles
Qu'exister
Vraiment exister
Ça vaut la peine


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post Oct 8 2007, 06:58 PM
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Translation of the previous poem will be posted if requested.

Something I came up with between soup and main dish.
Yes, I know it's short. Shaddap. dry.gif

Comatose...Or How You Were My Prison Warden

Hey, I remember you
You were the red herring in my fables
The anonymous vessel
A pleasantly acidic hand
I thank you with my lips shut tight
When I slept myself into burial
You scissored my fingers
And salvaged my remains


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post Oct 8 2007, 07:35 PM
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I personally like short ones tongue.gif

That short one was kinda...twisted and weird... I LOVE IT!! biggrin.gif

and yes...translatin please :S


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post Oct 9 2007, 05:11 PM
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Translation for Enfant Terrible:

Sometimes love kills
Sometimes love blesses
And sometimes love does nothing
And that's because of her

A genius demoness
Who lets her medals chime
In a pocket, in a corner
Of a somber oasis
A perfect machine
In a flawed system
Has nothing to prove
Draws the links
Know and destroys
Her reason for existing
She does what she does
Knowing the world
Forgetting the warmth

And I love her
Like lightning loves copper
Like the cries of crickets
Love to whisper to the night
That I love her
Maybe I'll be the vermin
That whistles in her ears
That existing
Really existing
It's worth the trouble


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post Oct 17 2007, 06:15 PM
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You Were The Snow

Before the brush
Had licked the painting
I feared you
As a hailfall in March
Several minutes
And stormwinds later
I saw the gloves over your claws
You said that you were the snow
Hear my teeth
Applaud


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