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rainbowbrat
post Dec 3 2007, 06:19 PM
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The desire to kill
The temptation of death
It consumes my soul
It takes my sanity

Take a walk outside yourself
Walk over and enter my head
You would not last one minute
Walking in my hell

Blood stained memories
Of the young I have killed
Images of a shattered and shredded heart
Shadows that chase broken promises

You can feel the regret and pain
You can see the grief and sorrow
You can not hide from the guilt and the shame
You have no where to run


They say time heals all pain
But they never said how long
They gave no warning
Of the darkness it creates

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I had lots of time on my hands over the weekend with no tv or internet xD

I am a little rusty in the writing department, but hey...atleast I am writing again right? tongue.gif


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post Dec 3 2007, 07:05 PM
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I am a little rusty in the writing department, but hey...atleast I am writing again right?

Right. smile.gif And you're not rusty! That poem did gave me chills. tongue.gif


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post Dec 3 2007, 07:30 PM
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TY!

I have a couple more, but I left them at home xD


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post Dec 3 2007, 07:34 PM
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Ah, too bad. Show them when you have'em, kay? wink.gif


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post Dec 3 2007, 07:47 PM
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I adore it! (I'm kind of twisted, so I enjoy these styled writings).

Write more!

do it for all of us!
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post Dec 3 2007, 07:52 PM
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Of course I will NP!

@ CREA~ Glad you like dark writings, I will post more...I guess this will be my writing thread!


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post Dec 4 2007, 03:32 AM
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I liked it hunny. <3

I thought you did a fab job on it. MOAR! xD


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post Dec 5 2007, 06:17 PM
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Well done RB! *golf clapping*

I would have never guessed that you would write such morbid material though. wink.gif
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post Dec 5 2007, 09:01 PM
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Little Dancer

Little Dancer on the stage
Dance your sorrows away
They do not see the shame
They only see your beauty

Reach to the sky
Let your head hang to the ground
Spin spin spin
just don't look down

Lights flashing
Music playing
Adrenaline flowing
Clothes tearing away

Live for the moment
Indulge the feeling
Never let it go
Never look back


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post Dec 5 2007, 09:36 PM
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I have previously told you my opinions about this poems, but I just wanted to give you my support to keep on writing so intense and authentic poetry. This last poem was almost magical if you know what it refers to smile.gif


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post Dec 5 2007, 10:11 PM
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The first poem was really dark.
This second one...I don't know how you meant it to be, but it's sad and inspirational at the same time. It really touches me in a spot--I can relate to it.

You're a very good writer, RB, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.


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post Dec 6 2007, 02:37 AM
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You should title these, RB.

And I really like this most recent one.. Little dancer on the stage... It flows well.


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post Dec 6 2007, 03:01 PM
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ty guys...

Bini~ Title them huh...ok...lol

PG~ It was suppose to be kinda like a rememberence.... ie: remember your past, good times and bad, just don't dwell in it smile.gif


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post Dec 6 2007, 07:12 PM
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One Moment

One moment can change everything
One moment is all it takes
Sitting on the porch
Watching the world wash away

Trees waving in the wind
Power poles falling to the ground
Rivers overtaking the roads
Fish exploring a land they should never see

Cars floating
People dying
houses destroyed
Lives ruined

It happened so fast
In just that moment
Everything you loved
Swept away by the flood

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Inspired by recent events...obviously xD

And all I can say is that I am really glad the flood didn't take any of my loved ones away, and I am sending good wishes to those that had their lives destroyed by this horrible destruction sad.gif


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post Dec 6 2007, 07:17 PM
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Very touching indeed. I just hope you pass through that weather stage with no harm soon *hugs*


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post Dec 6 2007, 07:23 PM
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^I have nothing to add to that.
Good work, and good fortune to you.


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post Dec 6 2007, 07:24 PM
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ty hunny...it is almost dried up here...still some roads flooded and blocked from the landslides...

To the north of us and to the south it is still really bad.

It is weird to have floods here...I mean...just...odd

Earthquakes, wind storms, non stop rain...but to flood like this...wow...just wow.

Edit: Ty NP!


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post Dec 7 2007, 03:52 PM
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The Saviour

Lying on the ground
Shivering from the cold
Losing all feeling
From head to toe

Will this ever end
Will anyone ever find me
Reaching to the sky
While my soul falters to the ground

A shadowy figure lingers
Staring with intensity
I can feel the warmth
From the depths of his soul

The figure leans over me
He lifts from beneath
Raising my body and soul
Leaving behind all despair

The darkness fades
The coldness disipates
The feeling of hopelessness
Has turned to Hope

Can this be real?
I never knew someone could care
Never knew of hope
Never knew happiness

Maybe now it will end
Maybe this time it is real
No more bruises
No more pain

Am I only fooling myself?
Maybe this time will be the last
If the hope fades away
Then so shall I

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post Dec 7 2007, 07:18 PM
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I love the frequency with which you submit poems. And they're all decent too. That last one had me in suspense! biggrin.gif


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post Dec 7 2007, 07:31 PM
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Thanks...I always have stuff in my mind and was leary to post here because I thought they were not that good...but I figured screw it!

I can get it out of my system! hehe


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