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rainbowbrat
post Jan 15 2008, 07:49 PM
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LOL, thanks you 2!



Judas..I edited it because I changed the last line...it went better xD


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post Jan 25 2008, 07:31 PM
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Fantasy or reality

My body lives in a world of reality
My mind lives in a world of fantasy
The paths of each world cross sometimes
Leaving me to think of "what if I could"

I would fly far from the land of the free
Sojourn to the country of romance

I would hope to see you there
Maybe travel the towns
I would hope you would show me
A world I have never known

These feelings of angst
consume me at times
To finally embrace and feel you
Would be majestic and overwhelming

Though reality settles in
I know where I belong
I can't help but to wonder
Why the fantasy lingers around


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post Jan 25 2008, 07:36 PM
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It is a very charming and touching poem.

Good job. Really

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post Jan 25 2008, 07:43 PM
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It reminds me of a Zornik song. biggrin.gif
Love the poem though, good work!


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post Jan 25 2008, 07:43 PM
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Zornik? WTF is that?


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post Jan 25 2008, 07:46 PM
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It's a rock band. Doesn't suprise me you've never heard of them though, I don't think they've achieved international fame as of yet.


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post Jan 26 2008, 03:10 AM
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New one! I spent no time on it, just kinda spit it out tongue.gif

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The girl

Here we are collectively
Laying in the grass
Following the clouds flow
Lingering in my fields

Lay your head on my shoulder
Rest your eyes and let your mind flow
Follow me to the land beyond
Never dismissing your thoughts

Who do you see standing in the breeze
With long flowing hair
A Short attention span
And has the voice of an angel

Sitting upon a throne of green
Eyes as blue as the sea
Hair as brown as the dead grass
Skin as pale as a ghost

It is nothing more than a mere image
An image of what use to be
A girl that lived long ago
A very unsettled woman

Now open your eyes
The girl is gone
It is just me here now
The girl you have always wanted


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post Jan 26 2008, 09:52 AM
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I think this one has become one of my favourites so far

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post Jan 26 2008, 07:44 PM
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TY hunny happy.gif

I had a writing moment last night tongue.gif


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post Feb 8 2008, 01:45 PM
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yes very good RB! *golf clap* anything new?
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post Feb 13 2008, 07:01 PM
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Imagination Limitation

strange feelings arise
from the depths of my soul
something that has slumbered for so long
something I thought had disappeared

my body overwhelmed with euphoria
my mind brimming with unimaginable thoughts
how can something feel so good
when there has never been a single embrace

Living in this fantasy world
Is crucial for my mind
Longing for an escape
Finding it in unexpected places

This fantasy has raised my spirits
full filled my empty soul
There is a whole new outlook on life
Imaginations have no limit


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post Feb 13 2008, 07:26 PM
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wow that hit close to home for me RB. well done again.
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post Feb 13 2008, 08:06 PM
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ty!

I needed to write something, and this came out! It's accurate though happy.gif


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post Feb 13 2008, 08:20 PM
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This is one of your best so far imo. Keep on writing, you're getting better and better!


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post Feb 13 2008, 09:39 PM
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You keep on improving. More writings are demanded biggrin.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 11:09 AM
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probably the best ive ever read so far.


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post Feb 15 2008, 07:03 PM
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RB that last one, Imagination Limitation, imo was your best so far. Great poem, great title. I love it, love it, love it! smile.gif Nice work.


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post Mar 19 2008, 03:15 PM
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Seek

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I see the real you
Within the hollows of hell

Some times you seek love
Other times you seek prey
To find true love
You must seek inside yourself

Never turn away
From a friend so dear
Never lose faith
People may surprise you

Now run away high
Hide low within yourself
To show the true you
Would be a miracle of it's own
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I know it isn't great...but it is just thrown out...I needed to write something to get this stupid writers block to go away!!


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post Mar 22 2008, 10:22 PM
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It is a good one, don't worry. And now that I remember, I have a block myself biggrin.gif


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