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post Feb 10 2008, 05:15 PM
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Love and the Breeze


Soft breezes sweep through my hair,
As I feel you breathing.
Tranquility fills my mind,
As I watch you sleeping.

I see you when I close my eyes,
Dancing under the stars;
Your eyes twinkle in the twilight,
Searching for me;
What is it you feel
In your heart tonight?

Touch the sky, sweetheart,
Feel the wind and look up high,
Come to me, lover;
Spread your wings and fly.

Waking from a dream
On a sunset beach,
I stare at my reflection
In the calming waters,
And see only you, and I wonder -
When will you return?


As I look outside I see the breeze
Taking the leaves away from the trees
I stand here, thinking, waiting alone
Without you, my path looks very long
I remember the golden times we spent together
It felt like our love is lasting forever

It's a love like no other
You were a true lover
If I ever thought of letting you go
I know I'll be crazy and wrong
I miss you so deep
Everynight I dream of you and me

Walking with me, your hand in mine
We smile, we laugh and we are so fine
I wish if I can see your beautiful face
Listen to your voice in our secret place
I hold you here in the deepest place in my heart
It's a place where I can feel you, still close, when we are apart


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post Feb 10 2008, 05:56 PM
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Very beautiful, and a cooperative work!! That's awesome


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post Feb 10 2008, 07:26 PM
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I dunno what I just saw.........
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Awesome job, I love it!


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post Feb 11 2008, 07:26 AM
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Thank you Shyman & RB.


Uh oh I've noticed something, DY. We didn't add a title to our poem, oh no. xD


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post Feb 11 2008, 07:33 AM
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I would suggest "Love and the breeze", but that is only a suggestion


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post Feb 11 2008, 03:39 PM
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Marvelous, brrrrrr...love it 10/10, good job!



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post Feb 11 2008, 04:59 PM
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MOSH IT!


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Wow is all i can think of to decribe this.It's amazing


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post Feb 11 2008, 07:09 PM
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Enjoyed it immensely. So that's how a DY-LS collab looks like...
Well, that operation was a success, no doubt! smile.gif


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post Feb 11 2008, 08:18 PM
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The poem is amazing! That's what you call teamwork!



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post Feb 14 2008, 06:44 PM
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QUOTE(Lady Sora @ Feb 11 2008, 07:26 AM) *

Uh oh I've noticed something, DY. We didn't add a title to our poem, oh no. xD


Yeah, I know xD
Maybe other people can fit their own title to it, so that they are also partially involved in it wink.gif
Or something inspiring like that.

Thanks for the (very) positive feedback, everyone! Maybe we should do this again sometime.

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I like it smile.gif It fits well. What do you think, LS?


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post Feb 15 2008, 06:52 PM
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I can only think of one work to describe this collaborative work. . .

Wow!

I see when you get two great poets together, you end up with unbelievably awesome work. Both poems are beautiful, and flowed really well together.

Perfect 10.


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post Feb 18 2008, 02:59 AM
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Thank you everyone. I am glad to know that you liked it.


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I would suggest "Love and the breeze", but that is only a suggestion

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I like it It fits well. What do you think, LS?


Sure. You can use it.


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post Feb 18 2008, 03:10 AM
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Wow!This is very, very good.I love it! smile.gif


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