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Adrammalech
post Feb 26 2008, 10:57 PM
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Frozen throne:

"My body is the Iceland of a frozen throne
A throne that we call heart
A heart with no fire Nor sins to regret or atone
Since nothing lives nor dies
In the Iceland, keeper of the frozen throne.

The heart that feels nothing Nor anyone
Only emptiness and void remains
No hatred, No envy, No sadness, No Love
A heart locked and hidden in the deepest coves
Of the Iceland, keeper of the frozen throne

Will someone light the fire of coldness?
Will someone overcome the depths of emptiness?
Will someone find the throne hidden in the Void?
Will the savior ever come to save the man…?
Of the Iceland keeper of the frozen throne"


No comment from my part, just a thing i wrote spontaneously, hope you like it


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post Feb 26 2008, 11:26 PM
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Pretty good there, Adra! ...it's quite a sad poem, but I like it happy.gif

Frozen throne has a nice ring to it.


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post Feb 27 2008, 12:07 AM
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Very sad & beautiful.

^I agree with F_M. I've enjoyed reading your poem very much, somehow it reminds me of the song Frozen by Madonna. It's not just because of the title, maybe because of the emotions or whatever.


You've done well. I hope you post another poems, It'd be nice to have a new poet on forums.


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post Feb 27 2008, 10:16 AM
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Why'd you keep your talent hidden from us for all this time? tongue.gif
I hope you post more, I liked this poem.

And like fat_moogle said, the title does have a catchy sound to it. biggrin.gif


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post Feb 27 2008, 02:34 PM
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Thanks for your comment!, well maybe because i dont write much poems and i rarely come up with one thats why i never posted one nor anything


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post Feb 27 2008, 04:31 PM
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Holy Crap adra! AWESOME!


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post Feb 27 2008, 04:39 PM
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Ill take that as a good comment XD


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post Feb 27 2008, 04:40 PM
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yes, you should cause that is awesome! You really should write more.


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post Feb 27 2008, 04:47 PM
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post Feb 28 2008, 04:53 PM
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Wow, Adra, you are a very talented poet. Frozen Throne is sad, but beautiful. You are very good with imagery, and it flows really well. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your poems. smile.gif


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post Mar 3 2008, 08:14 AM
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You are requested to write more my Argentinian friend, that poem was a good one smile.gif


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post Mar 4 2008, 01:08 PM
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Well well well, you know me making a poem is quite rare, i have writers blocker for too much time that it becomed permanent.....*runs around because of guilt of not pleasing*


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