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post Mar 3 2008, 10:25 PM
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2 - second phase
1- first/ start/ opening

it was a long hiatus.

I was reading my old works, as well as my new ones from illumina, and
I realized how pathetic they are as in...

I haven't appreciated what I have.
All I ever thought about was the "sad" side of things.

Now that I'm a changed person than that boy from 2005-2007,
I've written this.

thanks to all who read it.

LIFE

The song of yesterday
Resounds in the winds of today

Remember those days colored in gray
When you had nothing? ( YES)
Their ashes float in the wind ever so slowly
Remembering that nightmare, I am here
Stabbed by pain

The struggle was hardest without
A single hand to grasp,
But…

A new song echoes in my heart
Time passes, seasons change predictably
And a person is reborn;
That is my life
Without hesitation
And maybe a smile too
I’ll wave good-bye
To those faraway days
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post Mar 4 2008, 05:36 PM
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Works well to remind someone that the present and the future, and not the past, matter. Great message, nice poem.


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post Mar 5 2008, 10:31 PM
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Nice work, CREA. I agree with NP, now when you look back at things you will always have this poem to remind you that life goes on. Loved reading it.


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post Mar 6 2008, 07:22 PM
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Thanks.

I know that now, and hopefully you can use it positively.

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post Mar 9 2008, 02:04 PM
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Seems another person had a personal dawn here biggrin.gif.

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post Mar 9 2008, 09:02 PM
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Strange, right?

I love your new name smile.gif
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post Mar 10 2008, 08:44 PM
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I love it CREA! Awesome!


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post Mar 10 2008, 08:48 PM
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Brilliant


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