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Adrammalech
post Mar 5 2008, 02:22 PM
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Paradise

"A man lived in the vast mountains
In a place full of flowers and fountains
Nowhere to be found, nowhere to be seen
A paradise where the birds always sing

A place hidden in the mountains
Of the great depths of earth
A place hidden in the forests
Where the plants always grow

A man lived in the vast mountains
In a place full of flowers and fountains
Where the wind dances in the sky
And the always birds sing and fly

A place hidden in the mountains
Of the great depths of earth
A place hidden in the forests
Where the plants always grow"



Here is another one, hope you like it, any constructive critism is valid


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post Mar 5 2008, 03:09 PM
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Nice poem, contrasts greatly against The Frozen Throne. happy.gif


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post Mar 9 2008, 02:01 PM
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A poem full of imaginery. Those are my favourites biggrin.gif


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post Mar 11 2008, 12:59 PM
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it reminds me of one of the best books i have ever read


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post Mar 11 2008, 06:38 PM
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I dunno what I just saw.........
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Very Awesome Adra..... happy.gif


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