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> Sora ni naka (under the same sky), 2-2
CREA
post Mar 6 2008, 07:25 PM
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Sora ni naka (under the same sky)



The meaning of every single thing
Drowns in the impure darkness
Without a sense of direction
I ran towards your profile
Etched in the purest light

Questioning whether
This world of anguish is too
Great to escape

Destiny exiled us
Fate broke our spirits down
Hope withered away, bathed
In the shades of regret
Sadness overtook the moment
You and I,
We stood there bitterly, under the same sky
And the heavens cried for us
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post Mar 9 2008, 02:08 PM
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Nice short eclectic poem. You seem to be good writing these. Keep it up


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post Mar 9 2008, 02:47 PM
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Strong piece, great images especially in the beginning.
Japanese title seems rather gratuitous though.


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post Mar 9 2008, 08:55 PM
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hahaha!

actually, I used it as I love that expression in japanese xD


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post Mar 11 2008, 06:41 PM
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I dunno what I just saw.........
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Again Crea...very good!

Have you ever thought about getting these published?


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