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CREA
post Mar 10 2008, 09:29 PM
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This one is a long one, but I'm sure you'll understand why.
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I’ll take the boat across the sky blue waters
And the darkness of it’s depths
The soft waves roll under the paths and marks
We made upon the white sands with our feet

The softness of our untouchable laughter
Rolls away to the clouds

And it makes me cry, maybe
Because those days are so far away

“But today’s all about facing the future, right?”
And the twinkles of sorrow that would’ve drifted
Down are vanished with a childhood song

But aren’t we all just vessels too?
Carrying broken bits of valuable things
Across the eternal oceans of reality
The waves crash, blinding everything
In it’s white foam…
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Tidus1
post Mar 11 2008, 12:58 PM
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great. you have really got a talent for this


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rainbowbrat
post Mar 11 2008, 06:39 PM
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I dunno what I just saw.........
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Awesome Crea! You have a serious talent for this kind of stuff...


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post Mar 11 2008, 09:24 PM
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This one is a long one,

That's not a long poem.
This is a long poem! tongue.gif

What it is is a good poem. Best of your new ones, imo! biggrin.gif


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