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Adrammalech
post Mar 15 2008, 11:04 PM
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Nothing Can express it
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Everyday we pass each other in the street
Like two people normally passing by
But i feel different and that i cant deny
As i see you pass, my hearts starts to cry
An unbearable feeling that i cant bear

My heart aches for you and only you
But i always have the doubt...
Can i find you in the darkness?
Can i open the doors to your heart?
or im just another passerby?

Your someone that i cant reach
Like the white clouds of the sky
Im just a man that cant reach
the angel hidden in the sky
An unbearable feeling i cant bear.


Dont worry im prepared for the load of "it sucks" that are to come, but dont be shy to say it now


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rainbowbrat
post Mar 19 2008, 03:10 PM
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I dunno what I just saw.........
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Why the hell didn't I see you wrote this till now?? xD

I like it...it does NOT suck!

You do have talent!


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Adrammalech
post Mar 19 2008, 08:44 PM
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Why thank you, and now you udnerstand why im so annoyiong when i `post a topic because no one notices it


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post Mar 19 2008, 09:14 PM
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i like it to smile.gif
and i agree you have talent





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post Mar 20 2008, 04:16 PM
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I also like it! The second verse is particularly nice happy.gif

You could call it 'Unbearable' if you wanted. It fits!


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post Mar 21 2008, 01:39 PM
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I like sad poems, yours was very good & it saddened me. Thanks for posting it.


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post Mar 22 2008, 02:20 PM
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That poem was well expressed. The metaphorical language and imagery is good smile.gif


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post Mar 22 2008, 10:39 PM
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Sad but strong at the same time. And it doesn't suck my friend


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