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post Mar 18 2008, 09:25 PM
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time moves backwards into a cliff
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What never was still pains a little
Even if time has erased my feelings
I regret not halting time and saying
A proper good-bye.


The reality of the matter strikes
Harder before daybreak;
Laments are nothing now
And with what face would I cry?
Iíve needed no one by my side
And thatís how itíll remain, but

I canít admit to myself
That I mightíve missed you
Somewhere, wherever I might end
Iíll continue living
Even without saying good-bye

What was claimed by life
Taken by death
And held by fate
Questioning why is no good now

What never was still pains a little
Even if time has erased my feelings
I regret not halting time and saying
A proper good-bye.
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post Mar 19 2008, 03:09 PM
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I dunno what I just saw.........
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The only thing that doesn't flow is the very first line...that seems as if it should be a 2 liner, or re-worded...

Other than that, it is awesome!


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