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post Apr 30 2008, 01:18 AM
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time moves backwards into a cliff
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ヘ had made my mind up to be happy and enjoy everything for what it was.
But of course, nothing ever happens as you imagine and most of the time
you find yourself back in that place of misery.

The first piece: Time running out, moving backwards


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The distance traveled is too great, the scenery compressed as a tiny fragment of time
I値l try to look back to that horrible place at times, okay?

The truth is that I知 scared
To return there, and I realize
That I知 not walking away,
But nearing it with my steps

The treachery of the time past never leaves
So I値l hopelessly just lie here
Because there痴 no use in hoping for a better future

The faces passing by, familiar and new, are distorted beyond recognition
So I値l distrust their caring tones and isolate my soul

With people near me,
I feel desperate by their sorrows
Their weight falls on my shoulders
And breaks my weak chest

Time's running out
You might think you can live for tomorrow, but that痴 the mistake
Because a better, kinder world will never exist
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post Apr 30 2008, 06:38 AM
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An emotional and retrospective piece

It reminded me of "Mad World"


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post Apr 30 2008, 11:12 AM
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That's a touching poem, CREA. Your very talented.


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post Apr 30 2008, 04:40 PM
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QUOTE(Dawn @ Apr 30 2008, 07:38 AM) *

An emotional and retrospective piece

It reminded me of "Mad World"


Yeah, I can see what you mean!

Good job, CREA smile.gif


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post May 2 2008, 01:46 PM
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This is a great ouverture, I'm eager for more! smile.gif


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post May 6 2008, 04:49 AM
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The title caught my attention for some reason, I wonder what the "L" stands for. Great job, CREA. This piece really strikes me. Emotional yet powerful.


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post May 18 2008, 12:35 AM
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We are not able to save ourselves from trauma.




Are you able to see beyond the sadness that lingers forever?

I'll say to myself softly
"Act strong and happilly today"
I'll smile, cheer, and speak like nothing's wrong;
a beautifully executed lie
It dopes'nt matter that honesty is dead
because whatever pain I show will grow
deadlier, like a tumor
At the end of the day, my tired smile ceases
and sinks back into a eternal depression
I'm growing tired of this farse
but it must go on until it ceases to be credible

It's not very easy to describe the wavering state
of this weak mind, so...

Let's not let them see the pits
of fears and horrors of our minds
that eat us up a little bit each day
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post May 18 2008, 01:41 PM
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Love this dark-stained piece. Its opening was particularly eye-catching.


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