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Lady Sora
post Jul 2 2006, 07:35 AM
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Oh Right! and so we post 'em here? or we make another thread for poems and ask the members to rate 'em. The best poem rated will win?


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post Jul 2 2006, 07:53 AM
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actually i was thinking i was the jugde since i drawing them but that works o_O

We post them here and when the date comes then we open a new thread ^^
anyway i felt like doing one my self, even if i am the judge or not( the persona is aeris):

Aeris
The raindrops lay on the window
Even if the sun's rays lay on the glass.
The sun is rising
while the moon is above.
The plants grow,
into flowers.
My heart will follow
its destany.
Those words you told me
repeat in my head,
over and over.
The life stream has comused me
and i live with in the land.
But never forgot,
im watching over you.
These words will reach you,
From the clouds above.
Your sins are forgiven ,
even if you say no,
for your sweet touch
is enough for me
to love you.

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post Jul 2 2006, 09:36 PM
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First poem dum dum duuuuum:
Mothers so fine

Mothers they shine

Mothers align

All the food I dine;

Mothers and Fathers

Though the fight Bothers

Take care of me

I think that Mothers

Are just meant to be.
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Aeris
The raindrops lay on the window
Even if the sun's rays lay on the glass.
The sun is rising
while the moon is above.
The plants grow,
into flowers.
My heart will follow
its destany.
Those words you told me
repeat in my head,
over and over.
The life stream has comused me
and i live with in the land.
But never forgot,
im watching over you.
These words will reach you,
From the clouds above.
Your sins are forgiven ,
even if you say no,
for your sweet touch
is enough for me
to love you.
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That doesnt even ryme though.


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post Jul 2 2006, 11:40 PM
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nice poem josh!!!(how can i compete to that?)...and mr cuddles..a poem doesnt have to necesarily(<---wrong spelled) rhyme as long as you express your feelings or whatever it is that you want to express..and btw your poem is really sweet

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post Jul 3 2006, 12:44 AM
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I like the idea of people rating them so, no one can argue over it being fair and what not.

Is it one poem per person? [<-- maybe would make it easier to judge.But, I'm not sure. XD]




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post Jul 3 2006, 03:05 AM
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yes it is one poem per person .
and mr cuddles , not all poems ryhm (<- spelling)
its called free v.


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post Jul 3 2006, 10:00 PM
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QUOTE(Lonedove @ Jul 3 2006, 03:44 AM) *

I like the idea of people rating them so, no one can argue over it being fair and what not.



Ditto.


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post Jul 4 2006, 09:58 AM
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I see... So we open a new thread, and then people can rate them, and then we find the average of all the scores and then the winners will be decided, but the will be no poll XD and it will be open for a week. how does that sound? and you can start posting them here if you want


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post Jul 5 2006, 02:37 AM
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Sounds Fair to me. XD


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post Jul 5 2006, 03:33 AM
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First let me write my first poem not required by school just to see if I'm any good.

Boredom <--guess what the focus is

Sitting in my bed
I think I might as well be dead
I mean, what am I really doing in life

I guess I eat, sleep, and live
Just like everyone else
But beyond that, I do nothing

I have tried, you know
I've gotten jobs and have volunteered
But still, in the end, I just continue my routine

Things just don't work out
Even if they did, they would just be additions
Additions to my own, selfish routine

Why can't I break it
Why can't I be excited
Excited for once in my life

To me, everything is absolute
I already know how I will react
Even if it is something new to me

Do I have emotion
Can I feel angry, sad, or happy
Do I really understand myself

I am not depressed; I have my moments
Moments where I think I feel happy
But in the end, what is truth and what is illusion

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Hmm...it became more of a freestyle. I blame my recent misfortunes these past couple of weeks. lol Well, critisms would be nice. That poem seemed to take a bit more out of me than I expected... I think I'll save the contest poem for another day.

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post Jul 5 2006, 09:24 AM
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Ah it is ok... A bit boring to me o_O no offence but i guess it is abou bordem


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post Jul 5 2006, 04:58 PM
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I'd like to join! Sign me up, please! Thank you! And what's this talk of a name having to do with the arts? Do I have to come up with a new name?

Wakka

You struck that ball so hard...
The hemispherical bumps getting
Flattened by the force of perserverence.

You never gave up...
Determined to penetrate that
Triangular target, the target of
Every ounce of determination in your body,
Until every muscle bore all that it could.
Lattisimus didn't falter, nor did gluteus.
"You really gave it your all, didn't you?"

What a significant sacrifice, O humble guardian!
The sacrifice of one love for another,
Like exchanging air for food.
You cared about her, even loved her like a sister,
Didn't you?

You helped me out, when I didn't have a home,
Gave me food, when I was hungry...
You didn't change your mind after getting scorned;
I wish I could do more than lend you my talent.

O Wakka!
The jolliest of jolly,
The most faithful of faithful.
You have been blessed with
The spirit of joviality, so
Praise be to Yevon,
And never, ever, change!

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post Jul 6 2006, 03:43 AM
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very nice poem henry!!!...and ffmaster...that poem is wow!!love the feeling seems like youre really that person...ah..i still have to make mine..but hope fades sad.gif

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post Jul 6 2006, 04:49 PM
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^ Never give up girl! you can do it. just try, it won't hurt you at all. =)


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post Jul 7 2006, 03:22 AM
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actually i do try and a lot..but all these feelings get mixed up and besides i have problems with the lenguage and..what else..?!mmm there something else..cant remeber!!!!


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post Jul 7 2006, 09:09 AM
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^First, try to think of something. Write your idea and thoughts about that things then try to put your imagination on it, check your spell and try to make it simple to read and to understand. =)

Remember poems from heart are always the best no matter what! ^-^


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post Jul 7 2006, 02:49 PM
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Within.

Theres a shape,and dance thats forming inside of me....
Its becoming a second heart for me thats just blossuming.
Maybe its the way that a feel about today or maybe its just me.

A strong musical voice is my calling card Today...
Faithful and simple is how i want this story.
My face is showing exppression once more,no more
numbness or lost emotion.

Im trying so hard to do and to say thats right.
I know within me theres Light and justice stand here...
My tears....are a colorful Melody thats not afraid to be shown.

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QUOTE(B.Valentine @ Jul 7 2006, 03:22 AM) *

i have problems with the lenguage

Well, I couldn't even tell that English was not your first language, so you're doing just fine!


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post Jul 8 2006, 02:17 AM
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beautiful poem the hero!!!!!

thanks lady sora!!!..ill try later today...

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Well, I couldn't even tell that English was not your first language, so you're doing just fine!


really?!..thast nice to hear!!..thanks



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post Jul 8 2006, 03:26 AM
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Hmm...I wanted to write about Squall, but in my opinion, I think he has a similar attitude towards life like in my first poem, so I'll go w/ Rinoa thinking of him :-p Its short, I know, but I got distracted by my writing style. It scared me...

Rinoa

We will always find each other
I sit in the bench
Watching the beautiful night sky
I think of him; my shining knight
I feel safe when he's by me
He'll protect me to the end
We will always find each other
The power in me is overwhelming
But I feel I can handle it when I'm with him
Even if the situation seems impossible
I don't lose faith in him
He'll bring me back from the abyss
I'll bring him back from his
We will always find each other


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