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post Oct 19 2006, 01:19 AM
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Poetic atmosphere.

As i enter the future i touch my reflection...
i sink right to where it happened...
Where my heart felt a change of that touch.
i reconnect with the past and future.

Is it to late?To late to deepin the flashs.
My memory serves that my wounds still burn..
but they dont show.Do they?

Spreading what i can only fix with these tears.
Shadow'd eyes,Emo'd heart.Im alive,well,
not confused just dizzy.But happiness...that,
lies beneath ever Heart!

A sad song doesnt brake my spirit.I makes it stronger...
My internal story is to Live Real,be happy.


I made a second thread of poems because im having different feelings with a whole new set of poems and
everything.Its different.



Different Changes.

I blink Right not left,and i smile before
crossing the line.I lay down a list of
words to describe this feeling.i only get one...
different.

i wonder why?As i get closer with my inner,i
feel less numb.i know i didnt go wrong...I
went right!

Somewhere along the days i didnt wonder,i
slept into my soul.My fingers shake,my eyes smile.
Once apon a Happy...


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post Oct 26 2006, 06:11 PM
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Wow!
These are great! I can identify with:

I blink Right not left,and i smile before
crossing the line.I lay down a list of
words to describe this feeling.i only get one...
different.

You are really good at this! I admire your work alot
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post Oct 29 2006, 11:13 PM
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Wow thank You!!


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post Nov 3 2006, 01:23 AM
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Emotional Expressions.

Our touch's they,they lead to Emotions....
But those Emotions become Love.Hands
are very expreseve,like a paint brush...
Or the way our eyes make faces.

Tears,they tell many tales.But,those tales
are an instrument that plays a sad sorrow.
Destined for happiness...But played by sorrow.

Oh dont forgot love.heh,love.Based on different elements'of life.
They all lead to different parts to the story.They sweft the paint
brush to the next kiss or hug...They give tears,tears that play with you.

But most of all they give us a ''Light Of Hope''.The begining to that,but also
the end...That end leads to a new beginging.


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post Nov 3 2006, 11:15 PM
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Wow, nice poems you got there The Hero.

I really love romantic poems. <3 Keep it the good work.


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post Dec 7 2006, 01:04 AM
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Eyes.

The way they meet on the floor.
When i look up at you,you look away...
We stare,there's attraction,I cant,cant
explain this feeling.I think about it...this
everyday.

They say when you cant have someone the more
you want them...The tention,the looking away,
all of it,its so hard.You say what i feel when we
speak small talk,Thats even more harder.

Healing you,thats like touching you.But with non existence
of how you feel.The small talk is a bizaare,attractive.
I can feel it...feel it coming.My hearts beating,were walking.
Are there limits?There are touchs,and Eyes?

I edited the bottom.Its alittle from ''Eyes'' at Square forums


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post Mar 11 2007, 06:54 PM
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You...

My last performence to you..
I say the words i feel, take a moment,
and feel.The time we've waited to be,
You smile and look at me...

So many things unsaid...but at the end
i still want to cry you out.I just cant escape.
As we sit and lay, i give you my tommorows.


Your so undescrible, i can feel your presence...
Seems like the sunshines on us, Theres a place i
can go.And i know thats you.

Im always with you, everyday....its something
i cant even, say...There once was just me.And
there was once you.But now, there's me & you..

Oh hey im back!

Today.

We sat there on that open space,
Staring at each other like we've never seen one another...
Gazing into each other,thats something direct.
They say,Im not afraid to love you, But you say
lets walk, make promises and then, then we dance...

As when enter the room, we dance.The movements we
make give out a sudden melody...
The course changes, of course , when the music stops...
And yet, you'd think there'd be peace?

Im tired,lets rethink this and go, go back to
that special place, of today.Todays beinging lead us to
the special place.But, that place was of tommorows...
Time moves,but so do we, the course changes, but so do we

We stare at each other like we've never seen one another.....



Its The Way

Its the way, I look over.I take a peek, an wonder...
You come across and look at me, just that one glimse
it gives me...I know you can tell about what i know,
But it gives me a reason, a reason to keep safe.


You know that I hear your feelings, and it feels like
somethings making...You know, that i can tell the way
this is.I guess,....Its the way we first met, and how
the eyes made a sign.The reason to all these thoughts,
and to all the signs...


Along the road, I guess we get deeper...Just a glimse,
and maybe a peek, there are a few laughs along too.
That one dance....no small talk, Its The Way we stare.


My Tommorow.

Been awoken once more, but just to say the
same things,The attraction that brings us, something
more real then i can tell.So much more to do, to say....
But its scary, these emotions are like volumns, the
melody changes....

Our day starts of wrong, with the sky misplaced.
And the wind whispering, The moon awakens us...
We walk with the same feelings.

Im wanting to say more, and to feel as equal as those
words...You, wanting more out of us...Feeling the same, Feeling today, And not the Tommorow.


My Sanctuary.

Together standing, with the rights...
The whispers and the Fighters.Choosen paths,
Both on the battlefield broken with lies with the swords.
This is no pefect Sanctuary,But a determind one to do so.

Walking threw the church,whispers,whispers...The angels
were here.Leaving the sorrows ,passing oaths.Destinys
lie before the flower field.But hope stands with the cross
of the church.

Its about to being.Watch you sleep the death spiral.The spiral
of battle,Determination will end this one,Lets not dance,but clash
The waver,the beauty of Perfect.The peace and oh....the love.



''You & Me''

The perfect melody you and me,those exact words...
Our hearts pound just to sream the words
''I Love You''.Just they way our force of attraction
connects!

The way the passion listens to the words of affection.
Everyday...We cant walk away.Wait and lurking.
In the subway or in the stairs we say each others name.


Our loving is dreams of perfection.Its so non existable,
its magic!Expressions comes from the glares in are eyes.
Loving each other its hard to stay away.




''The Story''

Its opens up with a letter,a broken child with a whisper...
The tears come streaming down.He walks threw the glass,
feeling like the numb cuts of the past,daggered into his image.
He only does this to meet,her....

She comes in past that door,beautiful,undescribed,i guess u could
say more then beautiful.Her passion,inverted with life like colors
dreams of the reflection of him....

Together in this past-tense world,a grey world.Meeting at the seperated
river...But only,they just walked along looking about.Saying those words
''I Love,You.''Now dancing,summoning the creation of color,but with more
words.Just moving,floating feeling like,just feeling like....


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post Mar 11 2007, 07:00 PM
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I can't believe I didn't notice this thread before. These poems are great. I really like "You. . ." and "It's the Way". But all of them are terrific. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of your poetry soon. smile.gif


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post Mar 11 2007, 07:10 PM
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Guess?

Guess why i feel this way for you,
I'll pass you a look, maybe I just see
this thing in you.Now please, just elaborate to
me what you think?Tell me alittle somethin, just
express.

Show me, tell me, It'll give me more of a reason.
You notice what we feel...lets not just change the
roles in this story, I hear your emotions...

Do you want to figure out on whats going on?There's
no mystery though, So insecure about each others feelings,
lets deepin things though, because someday...


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post Mar 11 2007, 09:55 PM
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i really loved "today"

hey im glad your back with more great poems!:)


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post Mar 11 2007, 11:08 PM
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post Mar 22 2007, 01:23 AM
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Indepth...

My feelings, to yours.Theres a bond, a strong
melody is near.Here's me, defining my emotions,this
word to you...Saying what i know from what i see.
Changing our lable to ''Love''...

Living, breathing beside your presence.So, irrasistable.
My truth, I value you...The texture of us, is undescribed.
I swer, there's this look you give.I dunno why, I guess its
the smile i give you.The song.

You can be many things, but mostly this force of pure angel...
Dont know why it fits.But it does, maybe your the reason
but you helped...When you look, you see what i see.Thats what
this love is,ours...

I worked very hard on this!!Hope u like it.


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post Mar 23 2007, 11:59 PM
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What is...

What is love, is it that uncontrolable smile you give?
Is it that clueless look you have, maybe the magnetic
force you seem to up hold around the atmosphere...

I guess its just how you glare, maybe how you share...
Your the one that helps the wounds heal, making all
sunlight come out of the moon.The glares we give,
have a heavy bond.


Getting involved with our inners, surfacing what we feel.
And indoing so, showing our loving emotions...When i feel
your presence, i know you are there.The crazy thing is, you are...


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post Mar 24 2007, 04:26 AM
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These are really good, hero. You are very talented. they all have a pleasant flow to them, enjoyable to read.


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post Mar 24 2007, 05:31 AM
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both of them are beautiful..i really like reading them!!! and i agree with what claedi said "they have a pleasent flow"..


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post Mar 24 2007, 12:30 PM
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Thanks B. Valentine and Claedi!!I have an edited version of What is.Should i post it?well, not much changed i dont think, just a couple lines here.

What is...

What is love, is it that uncontrolable smile you give?
Is it that clueless look you have, maybe the exotic
touch you seem to up hold around the atmosphere...

I guess its just how we stare, maybe how we both know...
Your the one that helps the wounds heal, making all
sunlight come out of the moon.The look our eyes give
to one another, a heavy bond we have.



Getting involved with our inners, surfacing what we feel.
And indoing so, showing our loving emotions...When i feel
your presence, i know you are there.You always seem to appear,
to help the process of our love...


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Very nice, The Hero. I like the changes you made to "What Is. . ." You made a great poem even better. Keep it up, and keep posting them, I enjoy all of your work. smile.gif


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post Mar 24 2007, 01:09 PM
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Thanks, I going to add more soon!!


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post Mar 24 2007, 04:42 PM
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''The Smile''

So indifferent, so divine, what makes what beautiful is
that laugh.Just standing there, wondering into that gaze...
instead of just thinking, you show your thoughts through
actions.

Eyes so elegant as the seas waves.The sound of your voice,
sweet as nature's sounds...your the calming in many things,
many ways.The certainty of yourself is something else.

The expressions you make seem to have an artistic form of its own,
They should be famed, when you walk with me you give this smile,
that seems to just want to come up, to me...


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post Mar 25 2007, 01:46 PM
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You're really great. Not only quality but quantity. This thread is one I check because there's usually a new poem to read.


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