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post Mar 26 2007, 10:47 AM
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Im glad you like them.Hopefully everyone will!!


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post Mar 26 2007, 12:19 PM
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"The Smile" is my favorite yet! Your poems keep getting better, and I didn't think that was possible, they are all so great. Your descriptions are so vivid! Another winner, The Hero! smile.gif


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post Mar 30 2007, 04:29 PM
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This Feeling.

Me and You, i know....we dont know what to do next.
You dont have to say what i know, your eyes say all...
The tone of your heart comes from within your voice.
We lay next to one another, not afraid to touch...

Whispers have been made, us coming closer...
The indepth in our actions, you give motives
that i take in...Walking beside each other, so
understaning.

We can, you and I...Loving, thats what you give...
I get your words, feeling what you give, thats
a prayer.Just, its you...


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post Apr 5 2007, 02:42 AM
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What Is Love?

Love, a complex masterpiece,the one thing you get,is me.
The bond that performs before us, the international knowledge of our love.
That one special word, the way you are real...
Telling to move forward, to say whats true, to whats real...

The ingoing tale of us, the shadows force us, to grow together...
Saying im your own too.Giving emotions and more...
From the bottom, to the top of our hearts, I say i do.

Promise...so explain?my reasons, are many, yours you love.
I've exploded with emotions, each with their own flavor and feel.
These thumps and twists, so much more to say, so many ways to do so...




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post Apr 5 2007, 01:32 PM
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Two more great poems, The Hero. smile.gif I love "What Is Love", but, like always, they are both terrific.


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post Apr 5 2007, 02:18 PM
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Thanks, im really trying harder each time.


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post Apr 16 2007, 01:42 AM
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My Heart...

The attempted kisses, confused faces, the usual smile...
Feeling the desperation, just wanting...but, it hurts.
I smell you...i think no feel, and it just happens...

What is happening, beyound your eyes...sinking the
love from under the pupils surface, thats chemistery.
Spinning my heart, cant take the boiling, Blazing and bold,
We, both.

Tripping on the conversation, of silence... just say it.
Falling tears, with a side of uncontroling smiles... all you
can say, "I love.." but i know.Behold the love, to make
a voice...


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post Apr 16 2007, 08:10 PM
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Another great one, The hero! This really invokes deep emotion. One little thing:
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I smell you...i think no feel, and it just happens...

Instead of no, did you mean not?
I really love this poem, regardless. smile.gif


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post Apr 17 2007, 01:35 AM
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No, i ment to put no.Thanks!!


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post Apr 25 2007, 01:40 AM
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Love's...

The emotional abuse it has, so addictive...
Your voice is my ego, that touch, so hollow.
Different from what it seems, how you give
this together. The defintion of beautiful, its you...

Time to show another, These different buds, come
with new taste's.Dont look and not see...I know what
you define.Its our time, a glimpse of the melody.

I have the words, but sing your lyrics, tell me the emotion.
Stunts have been done, time to move on, heal your broken
words...Figure out what to do, what to say...Its just love's...


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post Jul 17 2007, 12:16 PM
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''The Forever''

This place,a non-existed place,The stare's and looks,drifted...
A ray of light before us,surrounded with less,feeling with more.
Our Emotions are universal, something great and refined with
the taste of another.

Your the guitar why'll im the pick, together we make a stunning
point in this new melody,this new love.You realize what cought
me was that gaze.Im exbiting the essence of your tones...

Lets go and lay, far away...where everything is forver...
This place is wonderous,but we are naturally,forver,
together...Based on what you here inside of me you know,
and thats all there's needed to be....forever...


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post Jul 17 2007, 08:28 PM
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Hey hero!I haven't been able to read your poems, so I'll probably save a couple and read them if i can get a break.


"The Smile" is really SWEET!
Are you in love???

EDIT:The Forever is amazing too! I really like your choice of words...
they really make the poems work.

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post Jul 17 2007, 08:54 PM
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Thanks CREA!Im glad u like my choice of words!!(like ur sig)


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post Jul 17 2007, 09:00 PM
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Thanks smile.gif
But yeah, it does seem to set you apart from other writers.
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post Jul 17 2007, 09:01 PM
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Wow, great poems, The hero! I particularly enjoyed 'My Heart...' and 'The Smile'. They were brilliant. Keep 'em coming! biggrin.gif

PS: CREA, I like your sig, too


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post Jul 17 2007, 09:04 PM
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QUOTE(CREA @ Jul 17 2007, 09:00 PM) *

Thanks smile.gif
But yeah, it does seem to set you apart from other writers.

Really?wow thanks.Im mean their are great poetry writers who r more detailed and have better grammer lol.Thanks! smile.gif


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post Jul 20 2007, 04:29 PM
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''Potential Of An Angel''

I feel the theme of angel, walking...dances just
because.Breathless air, Angels appear, Beautiful
and sophisticated.Ingraved in our soul just to move
that way...

Certain of what she does, stares and is a faceful of
clarity.Her soul is a form of art,ready and aiming!
The wind picks her hair like petals, soft and metallic.

Angelic and aggressive, ready to make us tempted
with the voices around...upon her is that dieversity
of style, She feels this prayer, moves because thats
what she's attracted to do...


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post Jul 21 2007, 01:23 PM
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Didn't read all of them yet, but I can say that the ones I did read were simply sublime and I'll definitely read the rest of them in the future. smile.gif


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post Jul 21 2007, 01:32 PM
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Hey thanks!!yay!what does sublime mean?lol i like that word!

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post Aug 16 2007, 07:51 PM
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Flying Creatures.

As I lay, today...I awoken.There they were.
In my depths you can see, Their wings shield me...
If you touch, they purify.They shift my heart, making
the sun in me sing...

You'd think i'd be afraid, clouds darken and resurface
the raindrops...but the candles show, they burn with
a mist.Their telling me to follow each instrumental
step.

My soul is filled with these creatures, i scream their
voices, Innocence of their sleeping castle...Brilliant
flyers, I believe them.These flying creatures...
Angels....

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